Indicating independent research into representations of gender in thriller films and comparing these representations to the representation of gender in your own film.
Level 3-4 borderline(if you'd included points about masculinity being threatened in that Louis appears to be emasculated, and points about representations of ethnically white British youth as isolated and predatory this would've raised your grade.
Nevertheless an intelligent and well organised response.
Indicating independent research into representations of gender in thriller films and comparing these representations to the representation of gender in your own film.
ReplyDeleteLevel 3-4 borderline(if you'd included points about masculinity being threatened in that Louis appears to be emasculated, and points about representations of ethnically white British youth as isolated and predatory this would've raised your grade.
Nevertheless an intelligent and well organised response.
By the way a vast improvement on your first draft.
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